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Yeah so this is my first "mature content" post only because I didn't know if some people would be disturbed by it or not. :/
So anyway! I had sketched this originally for Goretober but I decided not to do Goretober at the last second. And while looking through my notifications I found this: picolo-kun.deviantart.com/art/…
This tutorial proved to be so much help (Thank you so much Picolo-kun! I'm a big fan!) and I suggest it to anyone who has trouble with inking or tracing traditional art in general.
So after a bit, I decided to use this to finish that sketch! And this is what came of it. I have to say, I'm pretty proud of it, but I would love some critiques on this drawing! (I would just put it out there but I don't have a core so yeah) Please be honest, I'd love any tips from anybody!
So anyway! I had sketched this originally for Goretober but I decided not to do Goretober at the last second. And while looking through my notifications I found this: picolo-kun.deviantart.com/art/…
This tutorial proved to be so much help (Thank you so much Picolo-kun! I'm a big fan!) and I suggest it to anyone who has trouble with inking or tracing traditional art in general.
So after a bit, I decided to use this to finish that sketch! And this is what came of it. I have to say, I'm pretty proud of it, but I would love some critiques on this drawing! (I would just put it out there but I don't have a core so yeah) Please be honest, I'd love any tips from anybody!
Image size
2370x2277px 1.17 MB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 5
Shutter Speed
1/17 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Oct 16, 2016 10:55:49 PM -04:00
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Howdy! This is creepy and cool and I think you did a good job pulling stuff from the tutorial! The thicker lines outside contrast really nicely with the thinner lines inside!
CRIT SINCE YOU ASKED:
The shading and the way you made the lines on the tentacles coming out of their mouth looks really great! It makes them look three dimensional. But then when you look up at the nose and eye, they're shaded completely differently and look like they're drawn in an entirely different style. I'd also suggest making the inside of the character's ear (even though I think you mean for them to be flattened in distress) visible so that they look 3d the way the mouth tentacles do.
I hope this helps! Keep drawing!
CRIT SINCE YOU ASKED:
The shading and the way you made the lines on the tentacles coming out of their mouth looks really great! It makes them look three dimensional. But then when you look up at the nose and eye, they're shaded completely differently and look like they're drawn in an entirely different style. I'd also suggest making the inside of the character's ear (even though I think you mean for them to be flattened in distress) visible so that they look 3d the way the mouth tentacles do.
I hope this helps! Keep drawing!